In your opinion, is this a good thesis statement?

I am doing a research paper on Edward Hopper. - Edward Hopper was a very influential artist who expressed strong emotions through inspirational art. If not, could you tell me what I did wrong?

I think it’s a very good thesis statement so long as you intend to explain why he was influential, what made him influential, and how he expressed strong emotions through his art. What made him different from other painters.

But yeah- really great thesis statement.

Ohh- I really like James’ answer as well…

3 Responses

  1. xoxobear13 Says:

    I think its good, but maybe you should add a little more. make it like two sentences
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  2. Evey Says:

    I think it’s a very good thesis statement so long as you intend to explain why he was influential, what made him influential, and how he expressed strong emotions through his art. What made him different from other painters.

    But yeah- really great thesis statement.

    Ohh- I really like James’ answer as well…
    References :

  3. James - THE NERD Says:

    Just spin it backwards :p

    Edward Hopper’s expression of strong emotions through the use of art allowed him to become very influential in the international art community.

    I don’t know, there’s nothing wrong with yours, mine is just a spin to get you thinking.
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